RE: The Big Rush (Short Story)

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Man, this is an interesting piece. I like how it all started and the story development is also amazing.

I just looked into 'Haze' to know what it means in this case. Haha. Now I know why its effect was so hard on Gael.

As for the job she lost, I hope the potential 50/50 profit from funding the first batch of the haze would come as soon as possible. Haha.

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I'm so glad you liked it man, thanks so much, that means a lot!

Yeah, I've been working on these sci fi fictional stories that all take place in the same universe and I've been creating ideas for different chems, so I can try and populate the world of the stories with different consumables that people use/ sell.

Yeah, I think the idea in place for Gael and Zivon is a profitable one, but there could be dangerous for them as well.

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Cool. It takes a lot of creativity to create this entire universe. Haha. But you are executing it nicely. That's so cool.

The story is captivating. It's such a thriller. Haha

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