RE: Lost In The Fog (Short Story)

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Cool stories, Epic battles, and space operas do have a place in my heart for sure!
My only feedback was with the use of the word "Speeder", when I read that, I thought of Starwars... so that colored my imagination of the events, but still, a great story that I enjoy reading. Thanks! :D

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That's a fair point man, I think I'l work out another name for them.

I'm glad you enjoyed the read man, and thanks for the critique, I like when people give me some ideas that can make my future writing better.

Yeah, it's quiet a thing man, I had a lot of this universe built up since before joining Hive, but after coming here the lore has expanded so much.

!PIZZA !LOLZ

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